Ananlysis of Rough Cut

This is our rough cut and a lot of work needs to be done if we are to reach the level we want to achieve.
For example, the opening does not have any establishing shots; only erratic shots which look very unprofessional and unplanned. This is because we have managed to get the bulk of the editing done meaning that anything else which needs to be inserted will be allot simpler because the basic outline of the footage is evident.
We intend to change the first shot of the pink lips to something much stronger in its tone in order to make the opening far more powerful than its current weak state.
All of the footage that seems irrelevant like the subject looking unprepared will be replaced with video recordings that will be significant and related to the music video.
The footage is lip-synced in time so all of this type of footage will remain in the same place and we will work around the valid clips so that we do not need to change everything.
When the blue lips change to pink at 0:28-0:30, the syncing is not as good as it could be so this is something we will need to review and make changes to.
Up until we the big close up of the subjects lips painted grey and purple, there is an equal amount of footage for each change of scenery, however this clip lasts too long and we intend to shorten this by inserting another clip towards the end of the purple and grey lip image.
During the purple footage, at 1:28, Cleo and I will insert different footage in order to make it less lengthy.
From 1:37-1:42 there is simply a prolonged shot of the subjects lips painted blue and pink which is unnecessary and so will be cut.
This happens again at 1:44-1:50 and so this will also need to be cut for the same reasons.
The footage from 2:00-2:08 needs to be re-looked at as again the blue lips are prolonged and shots of other colours of lips could be inserted, and the shot of the cat needs to be removed as this was placed into the music video rough cut accidentally.
2:20-2:22 needs to be removed as the subject was not fully ready for shooting and is so behind in terms of the timing.
This happens again at 2:37-2:39 and so this footage too will be cut.
At the moment there is not a definitive ending of the music video, however, we have planned to fade-out footage of the flaming bat to close the footage. After we make all of the above changes, the music video should be finished and to a very high quality.